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Rain Beckons

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By Prithvi S. J. Monteiro [ Published Date: March 23, 2013 ]

Rain Beckons

I went out for a walk on the heavenly street
The rain God came up to me and said,
"Rain beckons on the Earth,
It's time for you to have your birth"

Beastly thunders were my welcome song
Out were baubles from the condensed puffs
I dive into field where they count my worth
Rain beckons on the Earth.

I hike on ground in the form of streams
I put the muddy froth on top
I water the plants round its girth
Wow! Rain beckons on the Earth

Queer humans say I'm in frenzy
Others' simply enjoy me and say
"It's our life, it's our mirth
Rain beckons on the Earth."

Prithvi S J Monteiro
Lourdes Central School, IX B
Bejai, Mangalore-575004

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Joyet Coelho, India :
Alwyn Rasquinha, India :
Prithvi, Wonderful poem. Keep writing…God bless you
Valerian Sequeira, India :
God bless you. Please make use of God given Free Gifts and make him happy.
Sureshkumar Mahabal, UAE:
Dear Prithvi,
Very nice poem. Hope to see many more in future and keep up the creative spirit
Mrs.Veena, India :
Congrats! Very imaginary and creative.
Donald Roche, India :
Dear Prithvi ,I read your lovely poem 'Rain Beckons'. I liked the line, "I dive into field where they count my worth". This line implies how worth is the rain for the fields and also for the life on the earth.. Prithvi I understand that you are a talented student of I X . Remember that these high school years are the most important years (like rain or water for the fields) that will count towards your college education. Trust me there will be plenty of time to show your writing skill (poetry) later on in your life. Your talent Will get you the best grades! You will thank yourself later when you get into an excellent College and options (choice of subjects) in pre -university course. Wish you best of luck in your future.
Ronald I Gomes, India :
Prithvi.....great. A fantastic poet in making. Keep writing. All the best to you. God bless you
Cletus D'Souza, UAE:
Fantastic Prithvi, keep writing more wonderful poems. God bless you.
Veera Dsouza, Shivabagh/Urwa, India :
Congrats Prithvi! Keep it up. All the best.
joseph rego, India :
good prithvi, keep it up. God bless U.
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